Bluestar's Prophecy

Delany requested this book, so here's it review:

Bluestar's Prophecy is mainly about the life Bluestar had before she became leader. It also goes deeper into her love with Oakheart, reasoning why Tigerstarr grew evil, and what the clans were like some time before Firestar joined the clans. It starts out with Bluestar's, Bluekit then, first out of the nursery. Then, as she grows older, she becomes the apprentice of Stoneclaw until he is given an injury that never heals in an unnessesary battle is which her mother, Monflower, is also killed. Eventually, once she becomes a warrior, Goosefeather, ThunderClan's medicine cat and Bluefur's uncle, gives her a prophecy from StarClan. Insisting on her becoming leader, Bluefur works hard to become deputy with the current deputy, bedriden and sick. Although, that task become hard when she falls in love with Oakheart of RiverClan and gives birth to Mosskit, Mistykit, and Stonekit (later Mosskit, Stonefur, and Mistystar). With the brudel and bloodthirsty Thistleclaw on the verge of becoming deputy, Bluefur gives up her kits to a RiverClan queen and becomes deputy. Once she becomes leader and gets her nine lives, she thinks to have fulfilled the prophecy, but doesn't until she gives her last life to her clan chasing a dog pack over the edge of the gorge.

Was that good for my first review? :/

-MadiShae